better with black fingernail polish, more pressure applied to face, with a more aggressive facial expression! that would be priceless! As of this actual picture, its 7/10, missing some elements, especially for your style I'm a good judge of style, promise! Other that that, my congrats to you for an awesome idea, and your beautiful art gallery!
she had this problem in teh eye called t-PT&client=firefox-a&rls=org.mozillat-BRfficial&sa=X&oi=spell&resnum=0&ct=result&cd=1&q=estrabismo&spell=1"Estrabismo and when she was a child she was used as a lab rat to a revolutionary method to cure that problem... and it did work.
The doctor had to put a real big needle on the corner of her eye and injected some sort of cold liquid. It did work out. she is almost fine now. she needs one more injection.